For Day 25 of NaPoWriMo we were prompted to write a poem that begins with a line from another poem, but then go somewhere completely different with it. I chose Kato Shuson's haiku (I found her poem here):
I kill an ant
and realize my three children
have been watching.
Instead of beginning my poem with her line though, I chose to reword it and create my own troiku. You can find more information about the form of troiku here.
Kill a Spider
I kill a spider
and realize my daughter
watched me the whole time
I kill a spider
its small body squashed under
my size-seven shoes
and realize my daughter
later kills a ladybug
no care in the world
watched me the whole time
but does not understand that
it's not coming back
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