Saturday, June 4, 2011

The Eye of the Beholder

I wrote this short story in April 2006 for an allegory assignment in my English class. I'm not sure yet if I'll continue it.


The Eye of the Beholder


Darius knelt near a little pond and touched the white petal of a flower. The flower had six white petals with a yellow funnel in the center, its stem tilting the blossom to face the damp soil. Warm winds ruffled Darius’s blonde hair as he sniffed in the sweet aroma of the flower. He had never seen such a beautiful creation. He touched the soft petal and slid his fingers to the stem. Ready to pluck the exquisite flower from the earth, he placed his thumb and index finger on its stem.

“I wouldn’t do that if I were you,” an old scratchy voice whispered behind him. Darius stood and spun around to face the owner of the voice. A woman with graying hair and a kind face stood behind him, her hand on a supporting cane and her back bent from old age ailments.

“Who are you?” Darius asked.

“I would ask you the same except that I know your name, Darius,” the old woman replied. “Hasn’t your mother taught you manners? Close your mouth.” Darius stared at this woman, his mouth open. He closed his mouth at her words and took a step backwards. “Don’t step on the flower!” The old woman lurched forward and tripped over her booted feet. Darius rushed forward to catch her.

“Are you ok?” he asked as he helped her regain her balance. “I’m sorry if I caused any trouble.”

“I’m alright. And my name is Belinda.” She clutched her cane with whitened knuckles and knelt near the flower. Dark mud stained her white pants at her knees. She gazed at the flower and motioned behind her for Darius to kneel beside her. “Do you know what flower this is?”

“No,” Darius replied.

“Narcissus. It is called Narcissus. Such a beautiful flower.” Belinda gripped her cane again and struggled to stand. Darius offered her his hand, took her soft hand in his, and lifted her to her feet. “Thank you, dear. Would you like a job?”

Darius was taken aback. His mother had actually sent him from the house to search for a job. His mother was under the impression he should learn the value of a dollar and stop asking her for money. He couldn’t help it if he wanted new clothes or spending money to go out with girls. Darius nodded his head to Belinda.

“Well, I need someone to tend the flowers. Over that hill is my home and a nice garden with roses and hyacinths and rhododendrons. I’m getting too old to take care of them, so I’d like you to tend to them. What do you think?”

“Sure, I could do that,” he replied, “Thank you.”

“This pond is also a part of my property. That is the only Narcissus flower that has ever grown there. I have only one condition for you to get the job. Do not, under any circumstances, pick that flower from its soil. You would not want to face the consequences.”

Darius agreed, and they walked together over the hill to her house. The old Victorian home stood on the other side of the hill, and behind it a forest. When they reached the house, the front door opened and a young woman stepped out. She had curly blonde hair that flowed around her small waist. Her long lashes framed her big blue eyes. She smiled and showed perfect white teeth. Darius fell in love with her beauty.

“Mother! Where have you been? Annabelle won’t make lunch, and I’m hungry!” The young woman placed her hands on her hips and waited for Belinda’s reply.

“If you’re hungry, then why don’t you make lunch?” Belinda replied to her daughter, who returned a glare.

“Oh, where are my manners? Darius, this is my older daughter Rachel. You’ll meet my younger daughter Annabelle in a minute.” Belinda walked by Rachel into the house. Darius stopped in front of Rachel, lifted her hand, and placed a kiss on her soft white knuckles.

“It’s a pleasure to meet you, my beautiful lady,” Darius said.

“Yeah, the pleasure is all yours,” she replied, removing her hand quickly, and walked back into the house. Darius followed closely behind, watching her hips sway, wanting to twirl his finger around one of her long blonde curls. He passed through the house in a blur, his eyes never leaving the beauty before him.
They reached the back door and walked into the backyard. Darius had never seen such a beautiful yard. Flowers dotted the expansive land as far as the woods a quarter mile away. The garden looked like a colorful quilt enveloping the land. No way can I tend to all those flowers!

“Don’t worry,” Belinda said as she appeared at his side, “My other daughter Annabelle will show you how to care for the flowers. She’ll be helping too.” Just then a hideous creature in the form of a woman stepped by Belinda. “This is Annabelle. Annabelle, this is Darius.”

Darius stared at a mole on Annabelle’s chin. Little dark hair stuck from its black mass. Pockmarks covered her face. Her nose jutted forth and hooked at the end. Her eyes, though, were kind as she offered her small rough hand. “How do you do?” she asked.

“Fine,” he murmured. He shook her hand quickly and let go.

“Where’s my lunch? I’m hungry!” Rachel interrupted. Darius turned to look at his beautiful lady. How could she have a hideous sister? Belinda gathered everyone into the house and made them lunch; Annabelle assisted her in the kitchen.

April gave forth to May, May into June. Darius tended the garden every day with Annabelle at his side. He became comfortable with her presence, even talked to her. He found her very nice. But his eyes were for Rachel. He’d do anything for her. She’d appear in the garden and ask for some food or help braiding her hair. She asked Darius for little presents, such as a new bonnet. She asked him for flowers and butterflies. He always got her what she wanted. One time he fell in the pond trying to catch a frog for her.

On a warm and sunny day in June, Darius watered the hyacinths and chatted with Annabelle about an upcoming picnic in his neighborhood, a few miles down the road. Rachel interrupted yet again.

“Darius! Can you come here for a second?” Rachel called from the back porch. Darius excused himself and jogged towards Rachel. Annabelle hung her head, shaking it as Darius left.

“Yes, my lady?” Darius asked.

“You like me right?” She waited for his nod and continued, “Well, if you want to be with me then you have to do one thing for me.”

“Anything,” he replied.

“Follow me.” Rachel led him through the house, outside, overt the hill, to the little pond. She pointed to the white flower and said, “Pick that for me.”

“The Narcissus flower? But your mother said not to.” Darius stared at Rachel’s unrelenting eyes, her chin set.
“If you don’t give me that flower, I will not be yours.”

Darius knelt in the soil and stared at the little white petals, so delicate and pure. He stared at the warm yellow center. Then he looked up at Rachel, at her beautiful white skin, soft pink mouth, gorgeous blonde hair, and fell in love with her beauty once more. He plucked the flower from the ground. Clouds blocked the sun. He tensed, but nothing happened. Darius stood and handed the flower to Rachel.

“See, I knew nothing would happen,” Rachel said as she held out her hand for the flower. She took the stem in her hand and leaned to smell the flower. Before Darius’s eyes, he watched as she plucked each little white petal from its stem. “Mom always loved this flower more than me.” As each petal fell, a tendril of Rachel’s hair fell to the ground unnoticed by Rachel. Darius watched as the she plucked the last petal and the last beautiful lock of hair fell from Rachel’s head. He stared open-mouthed.

“What?” Rachel asked, “What are you staring at?” She crushed the yellow part of the flower in her fist, and Rachel fell to the ground onto a bed of her golden locks. Darius leaned over her.

“Rachel? Rachel?” He shook her shoulder. He leaned over her face and felt the last breath leave her body. Her fist relaxed and the dead flower fell from her hand.

Coming Home from a Bad Day at School

My sister Cassandra just started a blog http://cassandralynnmiller.blogspot.com/, and one of her posts is about an old story she wrote. So I thought I'd post a story I wrote a few years ago. I'm considering creating more posts about old stories and poetry that I've written, but only during times when I am busy or I can't think of what to write. I've been busy lately because my husband and I have been traveling and will be traveling again soon.

In 2006, for my English 212 class (we wrote a lot of short stories for the class), the teacher had us write a story that resembled Lydia Davis's style of writing. We had been reading a lot of her short stories at the time. Lydia Davis inspired me to write the following short story.


Coming Home from a Bad Day at School

A woman dressed in black slacks and a white blouse opens the front door and slams it behind her. Her husband swivels in his chair and looks at her over his glasses. He pushes his glasses up with the tip of his index finger and asks her if she’s had another bad day at school. She throws her brown briefcase on the coffee table and plops onto their black leather couch.

“Those brats just don’t listen,” the woman says between clasped teeth. Her husband stands and walks behind the couch to rub his wife’s tense shoulders. Five minutes later, he asks what she wants to make for dinner. They quarrel.

Later that night, the woman and her husband undress for bed. They slip under the red satin sheets and the husband reaches for his wife. “Not tonight,” the woman says, “I have a headache.” Both roll over, their backs to each other.

They fall asleep. He dreams he is making love to his wife. She dreams she is beating her students with an unabridged dictionary.

Sunday, May 29, 2011

The Inheritance of a Bonsai Tree

I entered another writing swap on www.swap-bot.com. If you go to the link http://www.swap-bot.com/swap/show/89267, it explains the requirements of the swap. Basically, I was given three words (an object, person, and place) that I had to incorporate into my micro-fiction piece of 250-300 words. I had to write about a tree, an heir, and a garage. I thought for a long time on how to use those words in my story, but I finally decided to write about a man who inherits a bonsai tree from his grandfather. I enjoyed writing this piece and would definitely enter a similar swap.

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The Inheritance of a Bonsai Tree
By Candace Shultz


Robert shoved his car door open. He grabbed the bonsai tree from the passenger seat and slid out from the car into his garage. After he slammed the door closed, he stormed to his work table and pulled up a chair, then sat down. He placed the bonsai tree onto the table, then he crossed his arms and glared at the tree as though he wished it to catch fire and burn.

Grandfather had millions of dollars and he bequeathed me his little tree? Robert fumed. He had spent almost every day with his grandfather, caring for his every need towards the end of his life. And what did he get for his efforts? A bush.

Robert moved his arm slightly and heard a rustling of paper in the inside pocket of his suit jacket. He pulled the envelope out. Scrawled across the middle of the envelope in his grandfather's handwriting was the name Robert. The lawyer had given him the envelope, explaining that Robert's late grandfather had written him a letter only to be opened upon his death. Robert grabbed a letter opener from the top of the desk and slit open the envelope.

Dear Robert,

If you are reading this letter, then I am dead. Along with this letter, you should have received your inheritance. I bought that 300-year-old bonsai tree from a Japanese associate over 30 years ago, and I have cared for it every day since. Though I'm sure you feel slighted that I gave you a little tree instead of cold, hard cash, I assure you that the bonsai tree is of much more value. Instead of selling it though, please continue to care for it as I have. May it bring you contemplation and peace of mind.

Sincerely,

Robert Abernathy Sr. 

Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Six-Word Memoir

I entered a swap at www.swap-bot.com that requires me to write a six-word memoir on a postcard and send it to my swap partner. I've come up with several six-word memoirs in this blog post. Which do you think I should send to my swap partner? Which one do you like the best?


College graduate still without a job.

First college graduate in my family. 

Reads in car; gets lost easily.

Shy, intelligent, lover of words, writer.

Secretly wishes to befriend a tiger.

Daughter and follower of the Lord.

I'm one of the quiet ones.

I love tigers. Birds scare me.

Love to read, hate to analyze.

I should have been an accountant.

Hates to cook; loves to bake.

Well, that's all I can think of for now. I think that's a good start. I tend to be a perfectionist, so I form words in my mind, then reform them, and reform them again until I either find the exact phrase I want or I throw those words away and come up with a different idea. That's why I sometimes find myself staring at a blank page for a long time. I have an idea of what I want to say, but I can't find the exact words I want to write. Other times, when I'm tired of being a perfectionist, I just write whatever and see what happens. I should probably do that more often. :)

Thursday, April 28, 2011

Random Comic (not my own)

Yesterday, Michael sent me a link to a comic strip because it reminded him of me. I know I created this blog to exercise my writing abilities and to incite passion into my creative mind, but I just wanted to share this comic. For some reason, I just really love it. I even printed it out to stick on my refrigerator, possibly the wall if I find a good frame and some other comics to go with it. Here it is:


If someone knows who I should credit, please comment (hint to Michael since he sent it to me).

Blue Waterleaf

I'm doing a mystery poem challenge at swap-bot.com where the moderator gives each participant a line to incorporate into their poem. My line is "petals withdraw, shut and shielded." I just sent this poem out to two partners, and I'll receive two more poems from other people. I'm very excited to use swap-bot because there are a few swaps that involve writing. Here's my poem.


Blue Waterleaf

Her petals withdraw, shut and shielded
From all the pain he has wielded.
In the dark, her frame is wilting
Until her entire world is tilting.
Thorns adorn her skin like tattoos
To protect her from his abuse.

When his shadow leaves her side
And the sun shines forth in the sky,
Her blue petals open one by one
And she stands a little taller in the sun.

But when the night falls again,
Her battered body will hang.
Her petals will withdraw, shut and shielded
From the pain he has wielded.
Eventually falling one by one,
Her petals will wither in the sun.


Sunday, April 17, 2011

A Trip Down Memory Lane

Doo bee doo bee doo!
Remember when we walked down Valentine Street
On our way to the bus stop to get to work,
And I was singing
Doo bee doo bee doo?
Then some pebbles tripped me?
You laughed so hard.
I still can't live that down.
Doo bee doo bee doo.
I love you anyway.

- dedicated to Michael